Today’s poem is from A Meal of the Stars: Poems Up and Down, by Dana Jensen, illustrated by Tricia Tusa.
If you read the title of the book carefully, you will get a clue to help you read this untitled poem:
again
hatch
to
songs
and
birds
and
eggs
and
spring
for
wait
can’t
boughs
tree
highest
the
in
nest
the
long
winter
all
Did you get it?!
This tall, thin book of poetry holds fifteen poems, all written in this format — one word lines, no capitalization, nearly no punctuation, no titles — some of which are to be read top-to-bottom as usual, while others, like this one, are read bottom’s-up! Such fun! Very few words mean beginning readers could tackle these and experience the joy of reading higgledy-piggledy! What a treat, when everything normally marches in such an orderly, left-to-right fashion.
Heights are the common denominator in the poems’ ideas, from ferris wheels to kites to stars, each entry comprised of just one wisp of a thought. As we lean our heads back and gaze up in our imaginations, so the poem climbs in a slender line up the page. Delightful! The poems, their riddlish form, and the artwork, give this book a frolicsome, happy air.
Tricia Tusa’s watercolor and ink illustrations have a lilting, summer breeze, lemon pudding, feel. Her perspectives capturing the sort of aerial, highrise content of the poems do a lovely job of reinforcing that s-t-r-e-t-c-h-y feeling of the whole package.
Just the ticket as we shake off the cocooning of winter and welcome spring with outstretched arms (well…we’re getting closer, anyhow, up here in the North!).. After reading these, I bet your kids would enjoy writing their own upside-downside poems as well.
Always love to plug a Minnesota author! Dana is from Minneapolis, and this is his first book.
For a truly inspiring feast of poetry and marvelous ideas for exploring poetry with children, check out the Poetry Friday round-up, which is being hosted this week by Diane Mayr at Random Noodling.
And here’s the Amazon link for Dana and Tricia’s topsy-turvy book! A Meal of the Stars: Poems Up and Down
From time to time I read one of your blogs that Alice receives regularly. This poem really caught my attention. We live by a “right-side-up Kingdom truth” in an upside down world. Thanks Jill. Larry
Sounds like it could be fun. I’ll have to look for a copy! Thanks for sharing.
Love the idea of reading up! Will have to find this book and enjoy. =)
I like those short lines and the unexpected direction. Fun!
Interesting poem, and fun. I don’t know that I’d use it too early when you are trying to teach early readers to go top to bottom and left to right…but still fun and doable when they can appreciate the topsy-turvey-ness of it!
Very creative idea.
Love this book, as did my fourth graders last year! Lots of fun!
What a fun book! Thanks!
What a creative book and refreshing idea. I’m sure children will LOVE reading some of the poems from bottom to top. Thanks for letting us know about it!